I taped my serves. Notes:
Bouncing the ball: right shoulder turned out, above the left foot. Bouncing arm almost straight, use hand to bounce the ball.
When taking the racquet forward: I turn my shoulders almost square to the net, lean forward too much. Instead, keep back straight, right shoulder

behind, right arm relaxed and slightly bent, not forward too much.
Moving back: head turned to the side, at the l

owest point, racquet hand is above the right hip, tossing arm is on the inside of the left hip. My head is looking kinda up, right arm is still more forward, tossing arm is too forward too. His shoulders seem relaxed, I'm hunched forward.
Start of the toss: head turned to the side, looking at the

opponent. Racquet arm moves

back to achieve a symmetrical position with the tossing arm. Shoulders turned sideways, body straight. I'm looking up, rounded shoulders, right arm hanging down while tossing arm is already almost horizontal.
As the tossing arm reaches eye level, head is still turned sideways, and the racquet arm is

at 45 degrees. I'm looking up to where the ball is going, racquet arm barely beyond the vertical position. Notice the heel of the forward foot is off the ground and the weight is on the back foot. I seem to be on both feet.
As the ball is released and the racquet arm starts turning up, notice how back the right

shoulder is. At this point, my arm is maybe 15 degrees off the vertical, but I start to turn the arm up. My weight is on both feet, his is on the back foot. His chin is to the left of the left shoulder. My head is to the right of it.
As the ball reaches the highest point, his arm is pointing up and behind him, almost

counter-balancing the head that's still looking to the side and to the left of the arm. My hand is pointing up and forward at the same angle. He is also more on his toes, while my feet are flatter, heels just barely off the ground.
As he reaches the lowest point just before the start of the push-off, he has the two arms


balanced to a pyramid above his base of support. My arm is pointing forward (yellow line). This probably lets him turn his shoulders even more. My right shoulder is slightly higher than his.
At this point, I'm turned way forward, my shoulders are almost in line with the baseline. It's as if he's rotating around a horizontal axis, and I'm around a vertical one. His shoulders move in the vertical plane perpendicular to the baseline. The fact that his head is back must help this. My head is nearly vertical at this point. His left arm bends right away, mine comes down straight almost to horizontal position before bending. Because my arm was pointing forward to

begin with, it's natural that it comes down straight. His arm moves elliptically, pointing backwards after the toss, after crossing the vertical position, then moving forward bent. Also, his forward leg is straight, and mine is bent, so I'm not getting any push from it, and the push from the back leg pushes me forward and not up, turning my hips square to the net. He, on the other hand, seems to stay sideways to the net.
Here, his left hand is level with the bellybutton, and mine is below hips. I'm completely square

to the net, while he still seems to be in a plane perpendicular to the baseline, sideways to the net. As he hits through the ball, he's at least a foot off the ground; I'm maybe a couple inches off.
On the follow-through, his shoulders are square to the net, while mine are sideways. This makes

sense given that my shoulders were square at the hit, and his were sideways. My left arm is straight and is pointing backwards, while his is bent and next to his side.
He finishes with his right foot more aggressively forward to balance himself. Mine is just barely

in front of me.